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Jack B. Johnson (User)
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Family portrait month,,, peak color is now.
 
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Jack, it's look great, nicely framed of you by position them with water as a background. I think the girl to the right could have had her legs to her left, not into the camera as now.
 
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Thanks Robert,
I do have poses with the girls legs positioned to the left, unfortunately, there are closed eyes, and "dog movement" in them. Working with two kids and a dog and keep all three in a position you want them to be in, can be very frustrating.
 
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Jack

I agree with Robert about the RH girls legs.

A couple of composition comments:-
The light on the water on RHS is distracting - could have been shot from further to your right.
The man's head just touches the far shoreline. I would have preferred a fractionally higher camera position so that all four heads were against the water.
Just my personal view!

Geoff
 
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