Hi Robert.
The shots look really good and I agree that the window shot was a really hard shot to do. The light is casting one level of light, the window another, and the blue carpet is creating another level of contrast. :confused:
My goal for this photo would be to balance the effects of the various colors while making the two subject the center of the focal view. There are several ways you can do this that include B/W and soft focus rendering. For this one I tried several actions and hit on one that may work. I converted the image to sRGB and gave it a rustic charm look.
Frame it with a darker color at the top to keep the window from over powering that area and you get, IMHO, a very pleasing effect.